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Some of the sentence structure here is really too complex for encyclopedic writing. In the case of
I'm not understanding what is being said (should the second "his" be "the"?), and the sentence probably should be split into two or more. Charles Matthews ( talk) 19:12, 14 January 2010 (UTC)