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Y "The base contains several small setbacks to comply with the 1916 Zoning Resolution." I did not find this information in the body.
I've removed the 1916 Zoning Resolution, as it's not actually mentioned in the article.
Epicgenius (
talk) 23:43, 18 February 2024 (UTC)reply
Y "Two towers rise from the eastern portion of the base above the 19th story." i did not find this information int he body
I've fixed this. The architecture section says "two 12-story towers rise from the eastern portion of the base."
Epicgenius (
talk) 23:43, 18 February 2024 (UTC)reply
Y All other facts are supported by citations in the body. The lead is a good summary of the article.
Images
Y The article has eight images and they are clear, and properly licensed. The images also appear in the sections where they illustrate the content of the text.
Bruxton (
talk) 17:55, 18 February 2024 (UTC)reply
Spelling and grammar
Y Site section "The Majestic Apartments occupies a nearly square land lot" I am unsure how this fits in the article. Might need to add context or a set up in the paragraph?
Oops, I meant "El Dorado".
Epicgenius (
talk) 23:48, 18 February 2024 (UTC)reply
Y Architecture section "while Margon & Holder were responsible for building's Art Deco" missing a word
Y Development - $ at first occurrence US$8.5 million
MOS:MONEY alsoSomeone educated me on MOS:MONEY - I still think it is a minor "best practice" but the guideline does not say it is needed in this article
? Consider adding inflation templates {{US$|62.50|1963|long=no}}. I find them interesting
Bruxton (
talk) 13:27, 19 February 2024 (UTC)reply
2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with
the layout style guideline.
Yes
2b.
reliable sources are
cited inline. All content that
could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose).
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