"January 15 – July 24, 2016" → source plus add to the article.
"Pop punk alternative rock" → should be in the body of the article
Lead
Very small lead.
who wrote and produced the song, release dates, add more detail regarding the official video (resume of plot, director of the video and so on), some background of the song.
Needs serious work this section.
Background and composition
"Armstrong wrote became "Bang Bang"," → Armstrong wrote was "Bang Bang",
was released as the second single from Revolution Radio on November 12, 2016 → where?
The source says "Still Breathing" debuts on the Nov. 12 Mainstream Rock Songs" → release and debut are two very different things.
Discogs is not a reliable source. But I get that you intended the back cover use "CiteAV Media" to quote that stuff or use a side note.
Remove the Billie Joe Armstrong picture, its not from the video or anything like that.
Music video
This shouldn't be under the release section.
and feel content → use something else this sounds awful.
Sources should be in an ascent order. Example: 8, 12, 18
Reception
If you could add more two or three reviews wouldn't be a bad idea at all.
Link Music Critics to music journalism.
Chart performance
"The song also charted in Belgium (Ultratip Flanders), Czech Republic (Rádio Top 100 Oficiální), and Slovakia (Rádio Top 100 Oficiální)." → add the respective peaks.
"All lyrics written by Billie Joe Armstrong;" → not according to the infobox
Charts
Fine
References
This section is a huge problem in here.
First. Only link once when it first appears, for example, the first time that appears Rolling Stone you link it.
Some works are under publisher and the other way around, you can have both, however, GA's can have only work from the sources. Example given: Billboard
Missing authors in several articles.
External links
Fine
Overall GA review
Why there isn't a release history section with the process on top of it?
Missing a personnel section with credits.
No Live performances?
This article needs some serious work and after addressing all these issues I will give it another review. It seems a bit rushed from your part. On hold for seven days for the first batch of changes. Good luck, anything ping me.
MarioSoulTruthFan (
talk) 21:42, 4 July 2017 (UTC)reply