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Think I'll review this one.
Taylor Trescott -
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Here goes:
- Per
WP:RS/IMDB, you should probably replace those cites to it, maybe to something like the episode's credits
- Two DAB links that need fixing:
Enterprise and
National Geographic
- After you've introduced Neil deGrasse Tyson, all following mentions of him should be just "Tyson"
- I think you should mention the episode's ratings in the reception section
- "and ready for shipment on June 29, 2014." -> "and is scheduled to be released on June 29, 2014" sounds better
- You should mention Nicholson's 8.5 grade
- "Positive review was also given by Slate journalist Phil Plait" Shouldn't there be an "a" before "Positive review"?
Looks ok. I'll put in on hold.
Taylor Trescott -
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