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Taylor Swift said that her first live album, Speak Now World Tour – Live, was meant to capture what she wanted to "show [...] my kids and my grandkids"?
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The sentence describing the tracks is quite long, try to split it
"was supported by" → from the way it is worded it suggests that "Long Live" was released to promote the album
"Brazilian singer-songwriter" → I recommend sticking with just "Brazilian singer" as it doesn't seem Fernandes is known for being a singer-songwriter
"has sold 368,000 copies" → as of?
"additionally entered the top 30 on charts in Australia—where it was certified triple platinum by the
Australian Recording Industry Association (ARIA), Canada, and Japan." → try to reword, it sounds like it was also certified in Australia by Canada and Japan (?)
Hi, thanks so much for the review and your patience. Except where I responded, I have addressed your comments. Let me know if this article needs further work asap, because I might not be able to reach back after the weekend. Cheers,
Ippantekina (
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01:34, 15 October 2022 (UTC)reply
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Ippantekina: Don't worry! Thanks for addressing my comments. There are two points that were not addressed and I left a comment about one of the sources under Critical reception. Greets,
Sebbirrrr (
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09:22, 15 October 2022 (UTC)reply
Thanks, I have addressed the two remaining points. Regarding the Australian Telegraph, I removed it based on the many controversies it received; its sensationalism is reminiscent of the
Daily Mail. Hopefully the article is in good shape now! Cheers,
Ippantekina (
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15:40, 15 October 2022 (UTC)reply
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Hello, I have spent some spare time during my trip addressing some issues, but please expect me to be done by this weekend. Thank you for your patience!
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23:49, 10 October 2022 (UTC)reply