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"in parts of the southern Okanagan and lower Similkameen regions.". "In parts of" sound weird. Try to use a better wording for it. [you may like to use "Inside"]
I don't understand completely the first sentence on the second paragraph. I mean, i think you need to expand a bit about from where trhat deffinition comes and so.
Also, why the policy was amended? could you add a bit about it?
I have a little issue with the last sentence from the second paragraph: From what I read, it seems a bit useless or written more like an advert than an encyclopedic statement. Affirmations such as "recognize the importance of" gives me that feeling.
Done per above issue. TBrandley 21:11, 4 November 2012 (UTC)reply
Thanks for the review! I've addressed all of the concerns listed. TBrandley 21:11, 4 November 2012 (UTC)reply
GA review (see
here for what the criteria are, and
here for what they are not)