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I know, I'm on holiday and seem limited in what I can achieve on-wiki right now. Please be patient and I'll get to your review as soon as I can.
The Rambling Man (
Staying alive since 2005!) 17:15, 25 August 2019 (UTC)reply
Indeed. I am currently travelling back home, ETA another six hours if I'm lucky. As I noted, I'll get to this when I have a prolonged period of concentration.
The Rambling Man (
Staying alive since 2005!) 10:22, 30 August 2019 (UTC)reply
" by weekly publication Kantipur Saptahik sister publication of Kantipur" Shouldn't "Kantipur Saptahik" be in italics (it's a work) and I don't understand how it can be a "sister publication" of "Kantipur" which appears to be a publisher. And don't repeat "publication".
" Shah was featured on the cover, and was also interviewed inside the magazine of the M&S VMAG magazine" -> " Shah was featured on the cover of the M&S VMAG magazine and was also interviewed."
"who falls in love as an adult after being sought out by the holder of a childhood crush." I'm not sure I understand the latter half of this. Do you mean she falls in love with someone who had a crush on her when she was younger?
Done
"The second half of the movie, however, involves a significant twist to the plot." I'm not sure what relevance this has.
Done I don't know why that was there.
" psychiatrist.[19]In Shishir Rana's" space after ref.
Done
"who unknowingly falls for Intu" are we supposed to know who Intu is?
Done
" The film is set to release on 30 August 2019.[37]" it's September now, needs update.
Ok, I've made a few tweaks and think it's just about good enough for GA. I would heartily recommend that you get these peer reviewed in future before nomination, there were some basic issues there which I would expect to not be present in a GA nomination. But we're there now, good work.
The Rambling Man (
Staying alive since 2005!) 12:40, 5 September 2019 (UTC)reply
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