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December 25, 2011 or 25 December 2011 – make sure ref dates are consistent
Plot
"Simon Gates, who strangles him, his hands smoking while he does so." replace comma between 'him' and 'his' with en or em dash.
3 years → three years
"Meanwhile at an elementary school in Ohio a boy," place comma between Ohio and 'a'
"The agents arrive and meet with a social worker, who claims that Kevin has suffered injuries before and that his father was institutionalized, claiming that Kevin was in danger from evil forces." replace the bolded word with 'adding' to avoid repetition.
"two places at once is able", comma between 'once' and 'is'.
Production
post-production is hyphenated
Reception
an 7 out of 10 → a 7 out of 10
Otherwise, no problems with sourcing and imaging. On hold. --
Lemonade51 (
talk) 17:09, 19 June 2012 (UTC)reply
Thank you for the review. I believe I have addressed all the concerns.--
Gen. Quon (
talk) 20:55, 19 June 2012 (UTC)reply