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I think the director should be mentioned first in the opening sentence and then the producers.
Done
"Radha falls in love with Raju's friend Anand, and they get married." Lose the oxford comma. Not consistent with others.
Done
Is their any info on the budget?
No. They said that it was produced on a restricted budget. No other reliable sources found.
"who praised the performances of the film's cast." I feel 'the film's' is unnecessary here.
Done
The word 'film' is mentioned twice in a single sentence in the third para.
Made amends accordingly.
Cast
The whole male female cast divide seems redundant.
Agreed. But both the film's credits and the songbook mention the listing in the same way. I did not know whom to prioritize over whom while making a singular list. Hence i went with the flow.
Production
Link Tamil and Telugu language in their first mention.
Done
"but were skeptical of the film's success, as it had a very tragic script." The word 'script' would have suited if the script had never materialised into a film. 'Story' would be a better choice of word here.
Makes more sense this way. Amended accordingly.
"Relangi and Girija were chosen to play Apparao and Sita." Add 'respectively' here.
Done
Music
"He was initially apprehensive about the songs as all of them were situation based, and that Viswanathan's music received critical acclaim." Forgive me, but who is Viswanathan here?
He is the music director of the Tamil original film. It was already mentioned in the "Cast and crew" section.
"penned the lyrics" is very idiomatic. Kindly rephrase.
Changed to collaborated.
Release, reception and legacy
"Rakta Sambandham made a great impact on the on-screen image of Rama Rao and Savitri." The word 'great' is very pov-ish and non-neutral.
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Yashthepunisher: Sorry. Was out of town for weeks, and hence could not notice this happening. I have worked on all the suggestions above. Feel free to suggest further which you feel necessary.
Veera Narayana 04:52, 3 March 2020 (UTC)reply