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I'll work on this review over the coming days. As an initial comment, the formatting of most sources needs to be improved. Some are bare URLs, many others are just the URL and title without basic details like author/publisher/date, and per
MOS:DATETIES all dates should be in mdy format.
Pi.1415926535 (
talk) 01:36, 6 December 2023 (UTC)reply
Okay. I am failing the nomination (without prejudice) since there are unaddressed issues that will need fixed to get to GA quality. This does not preclude you or another editor from nominating it again in the future. Happy editing!
Pi.1415926535 (
talk) 19:37, 20 December 2023 (UTC)reply
Infobox and lede
Coordinates miss the bridge and need adjusted.
Is an exact date of opening available (ie from contemporary sources)?
The lede needs a rework to match the standards at
MOS:LEAD. It needs to give an overview of the whole article, including history and design. There are some wording issues, notably the puffery of prominent architectural landmark and the use of "currently" (see
MOS:CURRENT).
I would recommend reorganizing the sections - the design section should be first, then probably the use. The history makes more sense after the reader knows what the bridge is like. (As with some of these other comments, this is not a GA requirement, but a recommendation for improvement.)
History
The paragraph beginning A second redesign needs reworked - the first sentence doesn't parse, and the second sentence is awkwardly worded.
What group was the 2015 announcement from? A source is needed for it not being done.
The final sentence of the section can be removed, as skateboarding is discussed in detail elsewhere in the article.
Only one image is needed for this section; I would keep the overhead shot and remove the view west.
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