A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with
the layout style guideline:
B.
Reliable sources are
cited inline. All content that
could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose):
It's a first reading, I haven't finished yet.
Ajh1492 (
talk) 23:52, 1 June 2011 (UTC)reply
I did some more updates, you might want to check to make sure I quoted the right percentages and sjem size in the infobox.
Ajh1492 (
talk) 23:52, 2 June 2011 (UTC)reply
Are you comfortable with the semi-colon usage in two sentences in the Lede?
Ajh1492 (
talk) 00:11, 3 June 2011 (UTC)reply
Might want to look at the 1961 elections article to see what needs to go into the infobox
Background
significant political changes in the government (Władysław Gomułka's ascension to power) they were delayed until early 1957 - consider rewording to eliminate parentheses, it's a little clunky
Among various promises ... promised free elections - how about Among the various promises made by First Secretary Gomułka, during the Polish October peaceful revolution, to the restless Polish population was that of free elections.
candidates from the main communist party (Polish United Workers' Party - PZPR) and one of the lesser communist parties (United People's Party - ZSL).[6] - you've already defined PZPR and ZSL, you can use the acronyms in the rest of the article consistently.
Soviet intervention, in case of G loss were also repeated by Radio Free Europe, - what is a "G loss"
Election results
Its Senior marshal (Polish title for speaker) - is the parenthetical expression necessary, you provided the link just prior to it
Consider putting the results in a table and have the pie chart as a cell in the resultant table - would be consistent with
Wikipedia:Embedded_list
Check for correct number of spaces after punctuation
References
Remove redlink in first reference
Google books link is blank on first reference
Replace bad links on reference #5
Consider moving details on reference #6 from Further Reading (Paweł Machcewicz, Kampania wyborcza i wybory do Sejmu 20 stycznia 1957 roku)
I think I fixed most issues. Gbooks links are a bit unstable; the page is there but we cannot view it. It may work one day, again. Ref 5 was replaced, as it is dead and not archived. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus|
talk 22:16, 2 June 2011 (UTC)reply
And done with various fixes and expansions to this and other commie elections articles, for now at least. I will try to get the 1989 one DYKed in a near future, I think :) --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus|
talk 20:29, 3 June 2011 (UTC)reply