Duly noted on the above, looks like everything was addressed there. Here are the issues I found:
""Pig Bride" - a young blonde girl who hides her supposedly disfigured face under a pig's—face mask." the dashes there don't seem right. I'd remove the second one and replace the first with a comma.
"and the entire series was reviewed in negatively by" rm in
Si-Joon and Si Joon are used interchangably; keep it consistent (I'm fairly certain that with the hyphen is correct). Check the other names as well, since I see others that vary.
"before arriving the chosen mask," arriving at the