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Surely:

• At the inaugural ceremony of the Shrewsbury School war memorial his lack of physical fitness and courage were noted ....

should read:

• At the inaugural ceremony of the Shrewsbury School war memorial his lack of physical fitness and his courage were noted ....

Otherwise it reads is if he lacked both fitness and courage. I can't see anything useful in the cited source. Ben Mac Dui 19:11, 1 February 2018 (UTC) reply

Done. Icewhiz ( talk) 19:42, 1 February 2018 (UTC) reply