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A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with
the layout style guideline:
half of the references are not acceptable, see details below
B.
Reliable sources are
cited inline. All content that
could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose):
Overall: some of the comments from previous review was not address, e.g., "Twitter: The couple have three children" + the article is build on
primary sources + there is also excessive use of quotation that does not serve any purpose =
quick fail under 1 and 3
Pass or Fail:
Comments
lead
degree at the University of Melbourne during this period
Early life
unnecessary quotes, e.g., the line-up "never overlapped"
Management
excessive quotes that mount to copyvio
"manager again, but now assisted by", remove now
Creative direction
excessive unnecessary quotes that mount to copyvio, e.g., He would "pop his head in the studio to give his opinion" occasionally,
Personal life
"the manager travelled around South America", the manager is Harvey right? then write Harvey
Discography
source?
See also
remove, irrelevant per
MOS:SEEALSO, A "See also" section is a useful way to organize internal links to related or comparable articles and build the web. this not this section
References
General
excessive use of
primary sources, as in interviews (ref 1 and 7), Coldplay Official Website (7 refs) and Coldplay twitter (twice)
Ref. 25 is a tweet with a screenshot for a primary source, fails RS
Ref 26 is blog, fails RS
Spot checks
Ref 1, failed
Ref 20, failed
Ref 21, failed
Ref 22, failed
Ref 23a, failed
Ref 23b, failed
Ref 23c, failed
Ref 28, failed
Further reading
External links
Per
WP:LINKSTOAVOID, please remove irrelevant external links and templates as described below:
Coldplay Official Website
Coldplay on AllMusic
template "Grammy Award for Record of the Year",
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