There's tons of jargon in this article that really should be linked, but it doesn't affect this review. Examples include sprocket, turret, torque shaft, bogie, etc. How was the HL 120 TRM an improvement over the HL 120TR?
A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have
fair use rationales:
B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with
suitable captions:
Overall:
Pass or Fail:
I'm not seeing a whole lot of progress here. I'll fail the article and start an A-class Review if I don't see some noticeable improvements by 26 March.--
Sturmvogel 66 (
talk) 13:06, 24 March 2011 (UTC)reply