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A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with
the layout style guideline:
It would be best if the references use the {{cite web}} format. Reference 1, 4, 6, 11, 13, and 15 are missing an accessdate. Reference 3 needs to be fixed.
B.
Reliable sources are
cited inline. All content that
could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose):
Does Reference 1 cover all this ---> "In 1595, a lahar flowed down the valleys of the River Guali and the River Lagunillas, killing 636 people. In 1845, a massive lahar flooded the upper valley of the River Lagunillas, killing over 1000 people. It continued for 70 kilometers downstream before spreading across a plain in the lower valley floor"? In the Geology section, the link to "Ring of Fire" needs to be fixed.
A quick apology: a few minutes ago, in attempting to revert an unsubstantiated anon-IP edit, I accidentally re-introduced some vandalism that had already been removed. Sorry.
Feline Hymnic (
talk)
19:22, 6 October 2009 (UTC)reply
Cerro Machin
As redacted, the Geography and geology section implies that Machin is an ice-capped volcano, which it isn't. Also the USGS reference doesn't mention it, listing instead El Cisne as one of the 5 volcanoes. Maybe it should list El Cisne instead of Machin, or make it clear that Machin isn't ice-capped. --
Canaima (
talk)
15:34, 5 September 2011 (UTC)reply
Comments requested on "Recent activity" subsection
1st paragraph
"Between September and October" - meaning, I think, "During September and October..." (There's nothing "between" Sept & Oct)
Similarly, from the context I understand "Up to 2011" to mean "From the beginning of 2011..."
The sentence beginning: "Also beginning in 2010 were increases..." is awkward on several counts. It appears to jump back, chronologically; it is not clear what else was "beginning in 2010" - why do we need the "also"? We have "correspondent to" which I think should be "corresponding to". It is not clear what peaked in February 2012: increases in sulfur dioxide, or small eruptions of the volcano.
2nd paragraph
A comma is advisable after: "After seismicity continued to increase..."
"The peak in March passed without a major eruption..." The peak what?
It can't be right to say the alert was "raised" to Yellow, when it was at a higher level
Be consistent about "Orange" and "orange"
The following clunks a bit: "Over the next few months ash fell frequently until earthquakes increased again in June, and evacuations were ordered by the Emergency Committee of Caldas on news media for 300–1500 people." Some tidier phrasing, and maybe a bit more punc, would help.
"indicating an imminent eruption, and an eruption 7.5 kilometers (4.7 mi) in diameter took place" - "eruption ... eruption" should be avoided.