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"Uttara Kumara is happy to serve him. Arjuna uses the Sammohanastra weapon, which puts the Kaurava army to sleep." - I think these two sentences would flow better if they were merged
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Jaguar: I have tweaked the sentence a bit. Do give it a look and let me or Pavan know. —
Ssven2Looking at you, kid 15:12, 5 May 2017 (UTC)reply
Thanks, that looks good. JAGUAR 16:52, 5 May 2017 (UTC)reply
"Though Kameswara Rao offered to credit Kondala Rao as the first assistant director, the makers altogether left his name later" - does this mean that the makers left his name later on in the credits? I don't understand this part
Sounds like an excellent film! Those were all of the minor prose issues I could find upon my first read-through. I also made a couple of edits if that's OK. The article is solid overall and all of the sources check out, so once all of the above are addressed I'll pass this. JAGUAR 12:13, 5 May 2017 (UTC)reply
I really thank you and Ssven2 for the participation in this task, Jaguar. A special note of thanks to Kailash as well. All your comments have been addressed and i hope that the hurdles are clear now. :)
** Pavan Jandhyala ** 01:20, 6 May 2017 (UTC)reply
Thank you both for addressing them! With all of those issues out of the way this is good to go. Excellent work. JAGUAR 12:29, 6 May 2017 (UTC)reply