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Hello, I am planning on reviewing this article for GA Status, over the next couple of days. Thank you for nominating the article for
GA status. I hope I will learn some new information, and that my feedback is helpful.
If nominators or editors could refrain from updating the particular section that I am updating until it is complete, I would appreciate it to remove a edit conflict. Please address concerns in the section that has been completed above (If I've raised concerns up to references, feel free to comment on things like the lede.)
I generally provide an overview of things I read through the article on a first glance. Then do a thorough sweep of the article after the feedback is addressed. After this, I will present the pass/failure. I will use strikethrough tags when concerns are met. Even if something is obvious why my concern is met, please leave a message as courtesy.
Best of luck! you can also use the {{done}} tag to state when something is addressed. Lee Vilenski(
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Please let me know after the review is done, if you were happy with the review! Obviously this is regarding the article's quality, however, I want to be happy and civil to all, so let me know if I have done a good job, regardless of the article's outcome.
Immediate Failures
It is a long way from meeting any one of the six good article criteria -
It contains copyright infringements -
It has, or needs, cleanup banners that are unquestionably still valid. These include{{cleanup}}, {{POV}}, {{unreferenced}} or large numbers of {{citation needed}}, {{clarify}}, or similar tags. (See also {{QF-tags}}). -
It is not stable due to edit warring on the page. -
The initials NSMMHL are pointless, as you don't refer using this text again in the lede. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski(
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drafted 174th overall by the New York Rangers in the 2017 NHL Entry Draft. - no need for "drafted", perhaps "picked" to avoid repetition. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski(
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Done
Lede could probably do with a little more to it. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski(
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Ref two should be used after the first sentence, as it covers all the info. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski(
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Done
You need to be a bit careful referring to the game as "hockey", as there is a similar game called
field hockey. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski(
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Done
links from lede also apply to the body, so you'll need to relink
Nova Scotia on first use, etc. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski(
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Done
Not a part of this review - but do they really call junior ice hockey "midget ice hockey?" Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski(
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"from the minute we drafted him, the more we get to know him, the more we like him. Not just on ice, but off ice. How he handles himself at the rink and away from the rink is impressive." - feels like a big ol' pile of waft to me. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski(
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Done
Do we have a glossary entry for "power forward"? Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski(
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"it was really exciting...it's obviously an exciting atmosphere out there and something I've never experienced before. So to be able to bury one out there, it's a lot of fun to be able to help the team get a win there and get us started off on the right foot." - just because he said this doesn't mean its encyclopedic. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski(
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Done
Barron ended the season leading team rookies - this reads wrong. I'm assuming this means he lead all players who were playing their first seasons in the league? Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski(
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Done
Greg Ratushny Award - do we have no article on this? Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski(
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team in goals with 15 and points with 34 - leading the team with both 15 goals and 34 points. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski(
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I'll begin the review as soon as I can! If you fancy returning the favour, I have outstanding GA and FA nominations that require reviewing at
WP:GAN and
WP:FAC, respectively. I'd be very grateful if you were to complete one of these, however it's definitely not mandatory. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski(
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On hold - it's mostly jargon, additional links and such here. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski(
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