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Nominator: An anonymous username, not my real name ( talk · contribs)
Reviewer: Steelkamp ( talk · contribs) 14:00, 25 March 2024 (UTC)
Hello. I aim to get this review done within a week from now. Steelkamp ( talk) 14:00, 25 March 2024 (UTC)
This claim was refuted by the Islamic State in October 2016...
...during a visit in 2006...
That's it for the prose review. Its a very well written article. I have made some small changes myself in addition to the three above points. I'll do a source review next and I expect to have some comments about broadness in coverage. Steelkamp ( talk) 15:43, 25 March 2024 (UTC)
Luckily since there are not that many references, I managed to spot check all of them. I found no issues there, although I made a few minor changes to citation formatting myself. Steelkamp ( talk) 06:59, 30 March 2024 (UTC)
I found nothing that could be used to expand this article in my spot check of the references. However, when looking at the Japanese Wikipedia article on Ozaki, I found this source, which says his three remaining children travelled back to Japan after he was arrested in 2019. That could be added to the "Personal life" section. Steelkamp ( talk) 06:59, 30 March 2024 (UTC)
No images, understandably. Steelkamp ( talk) 06:59, 30 March 2024 (UTC)
Only a few things to fix. A short but good article. Steelkamp ( talk) 06:59, 30 March 2024 (UTC)
Thank you for your kind and helpful review. I've taken care of everything, although I noticed a slight hiccup in the article's first sentence: "born 1982" in is parentheses, while "as Sajit Chandra Debnath" is not, something more noticeable when previewing the article as parenthesized segments are hidden. There is also no comma before the word "also" in the same sentence. However you feel is best to address this is fine with me. Anonymous 18:34, 30 March 2024 (UTC)