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I'll be reviewing this articles as part of the GA Sweeps process. Upon looking at the article, here are the major issues I see:
- One cleanup banner. The problem needs to be solved and the banner removed.
- Incorrect dash usage. See WP:DASH for when to use a dash, compared to endash or emdash.
- Quite a few paragraphs with inadequate or absolutely no inline citations.
After these main issues are fixed, I'll give some more specific suggestions. The article will remain on hold for seven days for improvement. Nikki♥ 311 23:18, 16 August 2009 (UTC)