The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the
Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed
General
@
Grnrchst: just to let you know that I will be reviewing this article withing the next few days. I aware that you are undergoing a FA review, so take your time if needed! The
Blue Rider 00:27, 9 November 2023 (UTC)reply
How did women played a «a spectacular part in the revolution»?
Did they manage to overthrow the goverment of Baja California? Likewise for the capture of Mexicali.
There was no "government of Baja California", because it was just a territory at the time. It wasn't admitted as a state, with its own government, until 1952. It's more like the Magonistas captured parts of Baja California during the power vacuum created by the revolution - they captured it from the Porfiriato but it later came under the control of the Maderistas then the Huertistas. --
Grnrchst (
talk) 12:58, 9 November 2023 (UTC)reply
Who is Ricardo Magón and how does he know she said that to her husband and that she died with a smile on her face??
Magón was the leader of the PLM. And I don't think he did, these were dramatisations he wrote into his eulogy. He was a playwright, after all. --
Grnrchst (
talk) 12:58, 9 November 2023 (UTC)reply
Per some rule of Wikipedia, the quotation needs to have the original text, founded at Espino Becerril 2015, above the translation.
Which quote, sorry? --
Grnrchst (
talk) 12:58, 9 November 2023 (UTC)reply
The big one, «I love you but...».
@
The Blue Rider: This quote is also in English language sources and in the English translation of Flores Magón's article (see Further reading). Do I still need to include the original text? --
Grnrchst (
talk) 12:30, 11 November 2023 (UTC)reply
Ah, found the policy,
MOS:FOREIGNQUOTE. It says "If the original, untranslated text is available, provide a reference for it or include it, as appropriate." So in this case, I think its fine. The
Blue Rider 12:46, 11 November 2023 (UTC)reply
Legacy
A tad overquoting in this section, no? If possible, rephrase.
Probably, but I wasn't sure how else to write it at the time. I'll have a look at rewriting. --
Grnrchst (
talk) 13:03, 9 November 2023 (UTC)reply
Who is Benjamin H. Abbott? Perhaps put his their profession.
Clarified. Having looked into them, I just realised I was using the wrong pronoun, so I corrected that too. --
Grnrchst (
talk) 13:03, 9 November 2023 (UTC)reply
Stability
Last edited on 30 Oct. and no edit wars were recently in place. The article is stable.
Imaged
All images have tagged with their copyright status, are relevant and have suitable captions.
Copyvio
Earwig's Copyvio Detector points to
24.2% due to quotations.
Sources
All citation numbers are from
this version. Checked citation #1, #4, #8, #11, #13, #19, #22, #27, #32.
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.