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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina ( talk · contribs) 15:50, 11 June 2021 (UTC) reply

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina ( talk) 15:50, 11 June 2021 (UTC) reply

Infobox and lead

  • Non-free use rationale for the film poster looks good.
  • This link says the runtime is 173 minutes so the 192/125 runtimes need citations.
plus Added— 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS  ☣✅ 18:34, 16 June 2021 (UTC) reply
The 192 minute version still needs a source. Some Dude From North Carolina ( talk) 16:20, 18 June 2021 (UTC) reply
I apologize, just added. Have a look.-- 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS  ☣✅ 07:27, 21 June 2021 (UTC) reply
  • "an 1989 Indian Hindi-language" → "a 1989 Indian Hindi-language"
 Done.— 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS  ☣✅ 18:34, 16 June 2021 (UTC) reply
  • Add a serial comma after Ajit Vachani.
 Done.— 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS  ☣✅ 18:34, 16 June 2021 (UTC) reply
  • Remove the comma after "two individuals".
 Done.— 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS  ☣✅ 18:34, 16 June 2021 (UTC) reply
  • "The film released" → "The film was released"
 Done.— 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS  ☣✅ 18:34, 16 June 2021 (UTC) reply
  • "earning most praise" → "earning the most praise"
 Done.—
  • "The film features the score and soundtrack composed by Raamlaxman. Filming predominantly took place in Ooty." These sentences are in the last paragraph after mentioning the film's release/reception. I would suggest moving/merging them into the first paragraph.
 Done.— 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS  ☣✅ 18:34, 16 June 2021 (UTC) reply
  • "the score and soundtrack composed by Raamlaxman" - can this be changed to simply "music composed by Raamlaxman"?
Actually I am not sure if music includes both songs and backgroud music. Hence, I mentioned score and soundtrack individually. Your thoughts?-- 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS  ☣✅ 18:34, 16 June 2021 (UTC) reply
@ Some Dude From North Carolina: Is it okay to have two paragrphs in lead because if I make it three it gives lots of spaces. Please suggest.-- 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS  🍁 16:51, 21 June 2021 (UTC) reply
Two-three paragraphs are normal for a film article but for this size, I recommend three. Some Dude From North Carolina ( talk) 16:53, 21 June 2021 (UTC) reply

Plot and cast

Production

  • Remove the colon after "additional production credits include".
 Done-- 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS  ☣✅ 18:37, 16 June 2021 (UTC) reply
  • Add a serial comma after Deepak Tijori.
 Done-- 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS  ☣✅ 18:37, 16 June 2021 (UTC) reply
  • "but was replaced" → "he was replaced"
 Done-- 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS  ☣✅ 18:37, 16 June 2021 (UTC) reply
  • "in the last minute" → "at the last minute"
 Done-- 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS  ☣✅ 18:37, 16 June 2021 (UTC) reply
  • "Bhagyashree who had done lead role in" → "Bhagyashree, who had a lead role in"
 Done-- 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS  ☣✅ 18:37, 16 June 2021 (UTC) reply
  • "changes in script" → "changes in the script" or "changes to the script"
 Done-- 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS  ☣✅ 18:37, 16 June 2021 (UTC) reply
  • "eventually Bhagyashree giving nod to the film" - bit wordy so reword.
 Done-- 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS  ☣✅ 18:37, 16 June 2021 (UTC) reply
  • "Mohnish Bahl who played villain's role in the film, veteran actress and Bahl's mother Nutan" - same with this sentence.
 Done-- 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS  ☣✅ 18:37, 16 June 2021 (UTC) reply
  • "will be remembered" → "would be remembered" (already happened)
 Done-- 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS  ☣✅ 18:37, 16 June 2021 (UTC) reply
@ Some Dude From North Carolina: Mate, I have made few additions to Casting section. Let me know what you think.-- 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS  🍁 16:50, 21 June 2021 (UTC) reply

Release

  • Remove the comma after Lima.
 Done-- 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS  ☣✅ 18:37, 16 June 2021 (UTC) reply
  • That's all I could find here.

Soundtrack

  • Make this a "Music" subsection or simply move it under #Production.
 Done-- 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS  ☣✅ 18:45, 16 June 2021 (UTC) reply
  • Add a serial comma after S. P. Balasubrahmanyam.
 Done-- 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS  ☣✅ 18:45, 16 June 2021 (UTC) reply
  • Add a source to replace the "citation needed" tag.
 Done-- 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS  ☣✅ 18:45, 16 June 2021 (UTC) reply
  • "Aaya Mausam Dosti Ka" too features - typo?
? Suggestion please-- 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS  ☣✅ 18:45, 16 June 2021 (UTC) reply
 Fixed Check now. Please let me know if the sentence has got grammatical error.-- 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS  ☣✅ 07:53, 17 June 2021 (UTC) reply
Looks good Thumbs up icon. Some Dude From North Carolina ( talk) 12:29, 17 June 2021 (UTC) reply
  • "from a western hit" → "by a western hit"
 Done-- 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS  ☣✅ 18:45, 16 June 2021 (UTC) reply
  • "too are partly inspired" → "were also partly inspired"
 Done-- 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS  ☣✅ 18:45, 16 June 2021 (UTC) reply

Accolades

  • Reorder this along with #Release and #Box_office per WP:MOSFILM.
  • It should look like this:
==Release==
==Reception==
===Box office===
===Accolades===
Take a look now.-- 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS  ☣✅ 18:44, 16 June 2021 (UTC) reply
Thumbs up icon Some Dude From North Carolina ( talk) 18:53, 16 June 2021 (UTC) reply
  • Were there no reviews for this movie?
Sure. Allow me a day or two to have it.-- 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS  ☣✅ 18:43, 16 June 2021 (UTC) reply
@ Some Dude From North Carolina: Couldn't find much information related to reviews. However have added a little bit.-- 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS  ☣✅ 11:35, 18 June 2021 (UTC) reply

References

  • Update the British Board of Film Classification (#1) link.
 Fixed-- 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS  ☣✅ 18:41, 16 June 2021 (UTC) reply
  • Every archivable source is archived.

Progress

GA review
(see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):
    b ( MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):
    b (citations to reliable sources):
    c ( OR):
    d ( copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):
    b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

Overall:
Pass/Fail:

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