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Thank you Vinethemonkey for this helpful review. I have made changes to the article in response to your comments:
1. I ran a spell check, and everything seems to be spelled correctly. I'll keep an eye out for any grammar mistakes.
2. I have added a reference to an article of Randall and Sundrum in citation #67.
3. I reviewed the citations to older articles, and everything should be okay. I cited these older papers in the history section merely to give the original references. The statements in this section are also supported by Duff's 1998 article.
4. According to
WP:WHYCITE, citations are expected in the image captions as in the rest of the article. In this case, it seems to me that the statements in the captions are all supported either by the main text or the file page. Please let me know if there's any particular caption that you feel requires a citation.
5. I originally included the matrix picture so that readers with less knowledge of mathematics could understand. I have now removed the picture, but I would be interested in hearing others' thoughts on this.
6. I explained more precisely the connection to M-theory in one of the captions in the section on AdS/CFT.
Please let me know if you have any further comments.
Polytope24 (
talk) 03:46, 27 January 2015 (UTC)reply
Thanks for the response, Polytope24, for the response. Most of these problems seem to be cleared up. In response to #5, we can see what the public opinion is about the matrix picture.
We are almost ready to go for good article. Let's just see public opinion about #5!
Vinethemonkey (
talk) 19:29, 27 January 2015 (UTC)Vinethemonkeyreply
Thanks
Vinethemonkey. The article has been pretty stable now for about a week, so I'm guessing people weren't too upset about the removal of that matrix picture! Please let me know if there's anything else you'd like me to change in the article.
Polytope24 (
talk) 14:59, 2 February 2015 (UTC)reply