Reviewer:WizardmanOperation Big Bear 03:16, 11 June 2010 (UTC)
Overall this is a good article, though I have a couple issues:reply
"On May 8 on Impact!," I'd reword to 'on the may 8 episode' or the like.
"They accomplished the task on the April 16 episode of Impact! Kong would turn face by attempting to retaliate." With the way it's written, it seems like a run-on, since i'm not sure if the exclamation point is meant to be the end of the sentence.
In the personal life section, all the sentences seem to start with she or her. Add in a couple Stevens or tweak how they start to break the repetition.
Just a couple small things; I'll put the article on hold and pass when the issues are fixed.
WizardmanOperation Big Bear 03:16, 11 June 2010 (UTC)reply
Thanks for the review. I've addressed all of your concerns.
Nikki♥311 02:39, 12 June 2010 (UTC)reply