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I'll start posting comments tonight, Yash. Sorry I took up so much of time. —
Ssven2Looking at you, kid 08:28, 5 August 2019 (UTC)reply
Comments
Is it Khurana or Khurrana? Be consistent with the name right throughout the article. I think its the first but its your call.
"Written by Jaideep Sahni, the film stars: Anupam Kher, Boman Irani Parvin Dabas, Vinay Pathak, Ranvir Shorey and Tara Sharma in the lead roles." — Remove the ":" and add a comma (",") after Boman Irani.
"and seek the help of Meghna's mentor, Bapu, to act as the owner of the land looking for a buyer." — Do mention that Bapu's a drama theatre troupe manager and owner and then mention subsequently about the theatre and the troupe afterwards for clarity's sake.
"growing up in middle-class Delhi" doesn't quite gel well with readers. Kinda vague. Maybe something like "growing up in a middle-class house in Delhi" or "growing up with a middle-class background in Delhi"?
"Banerjee said a real life experience when he Sahni witnessed their father being insulted by someone powerful helped them to develop the character of the antagonist Khurrana." — Is it Banerjee's father or Sahni's father or both their fathers? Do clearly specify.
"He also watched real footage captured using hidden camera's to understand how they behaved" — Isn't it "cameras" and not "camera's"?
"Kher said that he tried to boost the team's morale as the film was "made while enduring a lot"." — Enduring what?
Isn't it Meghna instead of Parvathy?
"Banerjee was initially reluctant to give Parvin Dabas the role of Chironjilal but later decided to do so" — Its Chiraunjilal right? and also why did he choose to give the role to him eventually? Any reason for that?
"The film's small budget meant there were limited reels to shoot on two occasions." — You mean they "had limited reels" with them to shoot on two occasions right? Are those occasions mentioned by any chance?
Wikilink the publishers, websites and newspapers' names on the first instance they are mentioned (or) whenever they are mentioned.
That's about it from me,
Yashthepunisher. I don't see any major issues with the release and reception and post release sections. Resolve the above comments and the article is passed. —
Ssven2Looking at you, kid 15:03, 5 August 2019 (UTC)reply
Ssven2 Your queries have been resolved. Thanks for reviewing the article.
Yashthepunisher (
talk) 05:24, 6 August 2019 (UTC)reply
Use of international numbering system in the plot section
Is it an standard practice? If we are using Indian dates and Indian English, I've a feeling that lakhs and crores should be used; besides I'm pretty sure the film uses lakhs and crores too. I can't find any relevant discussions or policy, I'll be very grateful if someone can point them out.
TryKid (
talk) 00:11, 6 August 2019 (UTC)reply