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Reviewing this later today —
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Infobox and lead
Picture in the infobox needs an alt text (
WP:MOSALT )
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Some Dude From North Carolina (
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Fair use rationale is good
Infobox looks good
Plot, cast
Production
Development and writing
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Some Dude From North Carolina (
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I would change the order of the refs, so it's [14][16]
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Some Dude From North Carolina (
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Pre-production
Well written, but the entire section is based on one single source, would it be possible to add a second or third one?
That's about all I could find for those topics.
Some Dude From North Carolina (
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Casting
Hollywood.com should be in italics
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Some Dude From North Carolina (
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Filming and design
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Some Dude From North Carolina (
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Music
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Some Dude From North Carolina (
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AllMusic's genres should be avoided (
WP:A/S ;
WP:ALLMUSIC ), a single AllMusic source doesn't really cut it
Done Removed.
Some Dude From North Carolina (
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Done
Some Dude From North Carolina (
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Release
Theatrical
Home Media
Behind the Peepers - The Making of Jeepers Creepers -> – en-dash
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Some Dude From North Carolina (
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Reception
Box office
"Labor Day opening weekend four-day gross previously held by the 2006 film The Crow: City of Angels ($9.8 million)." -> 1996
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Some Dude From North Carolina (
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"By the end of its run in the United States and Canada, the film grossed $37.9 million" -> By the end of its run in/on Month/Year in the United States...
Done
Some Dude From North Carolina (
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Critical response
"compared it positively to Scream." -> add (1996) after Scream
Done
Some Dude From North Carolina (
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"acting work" is a weird term, "acting" would be better
Done
Some Dude From North Carolina (
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Accolades
Sequels
References
It's lastname, firstname for all refs
Done
Some Dude From North Carolina (
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Ref 20: website=Hollywood.com
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Some Dude From North Carolina (
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Ref 29: No need for the out, Shout quickly/Scream quickly is a better translation
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Some Dude From North Carolina (
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Ref 33, 36, 37, 43, 46: en-dashes (–)
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Some Dude From North Carolina (
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Done
Some Dude From North Carolina (
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The "cite Metacritic" template isn't linking it.
Some Dude From North Carolina (
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Notes
I would change the order of the refs, so it's [9][24]
Done
Some Dude From North Carolina (
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Outcome
On hold Great article, a few minor things but nothing that would take days to fix, I'll grant you 7 days.--
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@
Lirim.Z : I have responded / addressed all of your suggestions.
Some Dude From North Carolina (
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The picture under Filming and design still needs an alt description.--
Lirim |
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@
Lirim.Z : I added the "alt" parameter and a description. Does it not appear?
Some Dude From North Carolina (
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Fixed it. Happy to pass this article now. —
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