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Reviewer: Nkon21 ( talk · contribs) 04:36, 26 February 2024 (UTC)
Will review this within the next couple of days ɴᴋᴏɴ21 ❯❯❯ talk 04:36, 26 February 2024 (UTC)
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and the latter wrote the lyrics→ while the latter wrote the lyrics
Music critics praised the retro-styled production of "Hype Boy" and commented that it had a dreamy atmosphere.→ Perhaps rephrase it to something like: "Hype Boy" received praise from music critics for its nostalgic production style, who felt that it evoked a dreamy atmosphere.
NME, NPR, and Rolling Stone included it in their lists of the best songs of 2022. "Hype Boy" also featured on K-pop-specific year-end lists, ranking atop the list by NME.→ NME, NPR, and Rolling Stone included it in their lists of the best songs of 2022, and was ranked the best K-pop release of the year by NME.
streams in respective countries→ streams in their respective countries
division of Hybe Corporation where Min is the CEO.→ division of Hybe Corporation, where Min holds the position of the CEO.
Th group's→ The group's
without prior information regarding the group's lineup→ without any prior information regarding the group's lineup
Min explained that by releasing "Attention" without confirming the members' names and "Hype Boy" featuring individual members, she expected that "people would come back to the first video to look them up".→ Perhaps rephrase it to something like: Min explained that by unveiling "Attention" without confirming the members' names and by subsequently releasing "Hype Boy", which featured the members individually, she anticipated that viewers would revisit the first video to seek further information about them.
EP's three singles. On August 4Sounds choppy, perhaps rephrase it to something like: EP's three singles; on August 4
Gigi, Ylva Dimberg, and the member Hanni wrote the lyrics to "Hype Boy", a song about young love akin to a daydream.→ Gigi, Ylva Dimberg, and the member Hanni penned the lyrics for "Hype Boy", a song that captures the essence of young love akin to a daydream.
The song has lyrics in both Korean and English, and it is two minutes and 56 seconds long.→ It contains lyrics in both Korean and English, and runs for two minutes and 56 seconds long.
and its rhythms evoke→ while its rhythms evoke
Chin added that the track's arrangement using "tropical touches and future bass" made for "a dreamy, almost hazy atmosphere".→ Chin noted that the track's arrangement, infused with "tropical touches and future bass", created a "dreamy" and "almost hazy atmosphere".
It featured on unranked→ It was also featured on unranked
"Hype Boy" debuted→ Commercially, "Hype Boy" debuted
denoting 100 million streams accumulated→ for accumulating over 100 million streams
released 8 months prior→ released eight months prior
Sorry for the delay, but here are my comments! ɴᴋᴏɴ21 ❯❯❯ talk 02:21, 5 March 2024 (UTC)