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It is broad in its coverage:
Not yet
Any idea of unit cost for ships of the class?
I don't generally bother including cost, because it's basically a meaningless number - the problem is, there's no effective way to convert it to current pounds (at least so I've been told, the {{inflation}} template works based on CPI, which is not how you'd calculate for government projects like this)
Re: collision with Albemarle -- should mention that ship's damage too, as the collision was notable enough to be included in the lead. Also, any consequences for commanders etc.?
Done
"during which a German U-boat attacked the battleships but failed to score a hit.[13]" -- any idea which one? Can be a footnote if not clear.
No, unfortunately - it would be rather difficult to cross reference British and German wartime records for each and every encounter like this, and as far as I'm aware, nobody has bothered to do it
"Grand Fleet commander, Admiral John Jellicoe, ordered Bradford to take the 3rd Battle Squadron" -- No first reference to Bradford.
Good catch
Not seeing any commanders noted, odd a capital ship wouldn't have this recorded somewhere.
Burt generally doesn't mention them unless they were squadron or divisional commanders, and this ship was never a flagship
"she was in effect the most advanced pre-dreadnought battleship in the world." -- claim should get its own cite or indicate who said this of the ship.
It's covered by Burt - there's no need to repeat the same citation multiple times in the same paragraph
End of the article: Was the ship supplanted by a superior class at this point, or was it just general demobilization or the treaty that led to its disposal? Might be good to add considering the short service period.
Mostly part of the normal postwar drawdown - but I don't really have a source for this. Most of the dreadnoughts were scrapped too, though a bit later and as a result of the Washington and London treaties. I have added a line earlier in the article about
Dreadnought rendering pre-dreadnoughts obsolescent, which should give readers a bit of a better idea of the ship's context.