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GustavoCza, I read through all the sections, and nothing to add really, it seems well written! Nothing I spotted that should have had a reference but didn't. Not refs in the Discography section, but not sure if any are needed?
Sources spot-checking a random-ish selection:
[5] ok
[7] ok
[8] ok
[11] ok
[19] ok
[21] ok
[24] amazon link - is there a better ref for this?
[27] ok
[29] ok
[31] ok
[34] ok
[40] ok
[44] ok
[48] the source is from 2003, so sure his equipment still includes those items? Maybe better to say "In 2003, this equipment included..." or similar?
[54] ok
[55] source is from 2021, so not sure should say "currently". Also see
MOS:CURRENTLY.
[56] ok
This is very close to passing, but I'll leave it on hold for a bit for you to respond to the above. -
Kj cheetham (
talk) 19:02, 31 August 2023 (UTC)reply
[24] This website from 2012 says the album was released in the previous month, it should do the trick.
[48] Solved.
[55] Solved. But just out of curitosity, he still lives there and it's a very pretty house! GustavoCza (
talk •
contribs) 19:12, 31 August 2023 (UTC)reply
All looks good to me now, so this is a pass. That's definitely a house I could only dream of! -
Kj cheetham (
talk) 19:19, 31 August 2023 (UTC)reply
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