Reviewer:Wizardman 01:40, 17 November 2009 (UTC)
Overall this is a nice article. Nice to see good quality since I like The Hurricane. Anyway, here's some issues I've found:reply
"He later brought back The Hurricane character, and appeared as both Gregory Helms and The Hurricane on ECW." I presume this should be present tense but I could be wrong.
I think it works as either, but it makes more sense to have it present tense so I've reworded it. ♥
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Heart♥ 13:18, 17 November 2009 (UTC)reply
"He won his first championship shortly afterwards, by defeating "Playboy" T.C. Cruise to become the SWA Light Heavyweight Champion." What's the SWA? Note it. Same for SCW in the first paragraph.
"They also wrestled each other in a number one contendership ladder match at Starrcade, in which both Moore and Helms grabbed the contract at the same time." For what title? I presume cruiserweight.
"He made his return to the SmackDown! brand in February 2006, to start a feud with Nunzio, Kid Kash and the other cruiserweights." Was he automatically moved due to winning the title, or something else? Clarify.
"Helms went on to feud with Jimmy Wang Yang over the Cruiserweight Title, after a tag team match where Hardy and Yang defeated Helms and Sylvan." Which Hardy?