I'd wikilink
Amusement arcade into the first sentence of the lead
Done
I'd specify what Chirps are in the lead
Done
Is it accurate to say "With only the ability to run side-to-side and jump" when the character can pick something up and throw it? Should this be reworded accordingly?
Items are picked up automatically by running into them, and thrown automatically when you jump. I reworded it so they are not the only abilities Flicky has.
There's a collection of several titles (Sonic Mega Collection, Sega Genesis Collection etc) though no indication of when these were released. Perhaps add the year of release in brackets after each title? Or give an indication in the sentence, as in "Through the
2000s, ..."
Added dates
"also pointed out the games cuteness and concluded that the game was aimed for children and provided lower scores" - this reads awkwardly and should be reworded. Also did they give it a lower score specifically because it was aimed at children? This is unclear.
Yes they thought it was a lame young kids game and thus provided lower scores. I reworded, feel free to CE.