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Gaga aimed to be close enough to her audience so that she can look into their eyes while performing, → Gaga aimed to be close enough to her audience to be able to look into their eyes while performing,
The "Prior the tour" part, change will for would
Concert synopsis
Remove the comma after sat down
who served as co-executive producer for Joanne. → who served as Joanne's co-executive producer.
telling the audience how they wrote the following song "Grigio Girls" together, which Gaga → telling the public how they wrote the following song, "Grigio Girls", together,
and was present in the audience. → and was present there.
"Million Reasons" and "Just Another Day" was performed → "Million Reasons" and "Just Another Day" were performed
where she reprised "Joanne" and performed → where she reprised "Joanne" and sang
Gaga debuted new song → Gaga debuted the new song
the track "Million Reasons", and performed the song. → the track "Million Reasons" and performed it.
she sang "Angel Down", and changed up the lyrics to reference → she sang "Angel Down" and changed its lyrics to reference
Talking about her family led to a performance of the track "Joanne". → Talking about her family led to a performance of "Joanne".
Before performing the final song, → Before singing the final song,
Remove the comma after crowd-surfed
Critical reception
and while she believed that → while believing that
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