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19:08, 26 June 2013 (UTC)
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Thank you for taking up the review! --
WonderBoy1998 (
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02:47, 27 June 2013 (UTC)
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General
One dead link
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WonderBoy1998 (
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12:41, 15 July 2013 (UTC)
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Info box
Why is recorded 2008 and 2009?
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WonderBoy1998 (
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12:41, 15 July 2013 (UTC)
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This is an English language single, so Dexter doesn't need to be here.
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WonderBoy1998 (
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12:41, 15 July 2013 (UTC)
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As it is a dance song with elements of electropop and samba, electropop and samba should be removed.
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WonderBoy1998 (
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12:41, 15 July 2013 (UTC)
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Lead
is a song by recorded by → Spot the mistake
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WonderBoy1998 (
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12:41, 15 July 2013 (UTC)
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Is Shakira credited in the booklet as a co-producer? As The Neptune's rarely allow co-production.
I don't have the booklet, but many sites state Shakira as the producer of the song too. Shakira wrote and co-produced all the tracks on the album. --
WonderBoy1998 (
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12:41, 15 July 2013 (UTC)
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Okay. —
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Use a different word than "lauded"
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WonderBoy1998 (
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12:41, 15 July 2013 (UTC)
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WonderBoy1998 (
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12:41, 15 July 2013 (UTC)
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Should write 'chart' after the name of the chart
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WonderBoy1998 (
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12:41, 15 July 2013 (UTC)
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Background and composition
from the album She Wolf → Comma after album
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WonderBoy1998 (
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12:41, 15 July 2013 (UTC)
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contains strong elements → Remove 'strong', it's superfluous in this context
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WonderBoy1998 (
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12:41, 15 July 2013 (UTC)
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Critical reception
received very → Remove 'very', sounds bias
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WonderBoy1998 (
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12:41, 15 July 2013 (UTC)
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Music video
I don't see the point of the one sentence block quote, just keep it as part of the prose.
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WonderBoy1998 (
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12:41, 15 July 2013 (UTC)
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This section could simply be two paragraphs.
I made the section into three paras- Development, synopsis, and reception. Is that okay? Or shall I merge development and synopsis?--
WonderBoy1998 (
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12:41, 15 July 2013 (UTC)
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WonderBoy1998 (
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12:50, 15 July 2013 (UTC)
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Live performances
She definitely performed this song on The X Factor in the UK.
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WonderBoy1998 (
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12:41, 15 July 2013 (UTC)
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Charts
How come US Tropical isn't in the table if it peaked at 11?
It is there. --
WonderBoy1998 (
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12:41, 15 July 2013 (UTC)
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Okay. The Latin Airplay bit threw me. —
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2009 peaks should be in a separate table to 2010 peaks.
Done They were all 2009 peaks, I don't know why there was 10 there... --
WonderBoy1998 (
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12:41, 15 July 2013 (UTC)
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References
MTV, Digital Spy, Allmusic, BBC, UK Singles Chart, iTunes etc. should not be italics.
Ugh, I did this all in the beginning and some users used AWB and removed all the apostrophes. Well I'll do it again.
They should never be in italics, they aren't newspaper/printed applications. Whoever told you to make them italics was wrong. —
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No I used the apostrophes to just cancel out the auto italicization of these entries. Anyways : Done --
WonderBoy1998 (
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12:50, 15 July 2013 (UTC)
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Done
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AARON •
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20:39, 14 July 2013 (UTC)
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Passing. —
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12:58, 15 July 2013 (UTC)
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