Remove rap from the infobox, as that is not a specific genre like drill, hip hop, trap, etc. – but you can keep it in prose
You forgot to mention in the opening sentence that it is from his second mixtape, Meet the Woo 2 (2020).
"808Melo and WondaGurl handled" → "The first two of the four, known as CashMoneyAP and WondaGurl, handled" since 808Melo is not listed as a producer in the personnel or by
the source
Remove rap genre per my comment about the source in the body
A full stop is needed at the end of the first para's last sentence
"It
samples the lyrics of" → "The song
interpolates the lyrics of" with the target
Remove the release year of the song, as that is not notable for the lead per
previous discussion
"was released the same day and" → "was released the same day as the single release, which"
"meeting fans as and historical African American figures." → "meeting fans, and footage of historical Black American figures."
Background and release
Merge with the below section and retitle to Background and composition
"before its release." → "before its January 16, 2020 release." because the date is not mentioned until a good number of sentences later
"Scary L' → "Scary L"
"808Melo and WondaGurl handled" → "The first two of the four, who have the stage names of CashMoneyAP and WondaGurl, handled" for accuracy
The source does reference the release, but offers no mention of it being for digital download and streaming so remove those parts
"on Pop Smoke's second studio mixtape Meet the Woo 2." → "from Meet the Woo 2."
Music and lyrics
This should be the second para of the proposed merger
""Christopher Walking" is a" → "Musically, "Christopher Walking" is a"
Remove rap genre because only one source calls the song "drill rap", which is another way of referring to drill as a rap subgenre
Swap the second and third sentences of this para because the third should come before the 50 Cent lyrics, as it is about the meaning of the song
"The song prominently
samples the lyrics of" → "It prominently
interpolates the lyrics of" with the target, per both sources calling this an interpolation
On hold until all of the issues are fixed; crazy to think this was up for AFD just a week ago and you were considering quitting Wiki! --
K. Peake09:00, 20 February 2021 (UTC)reply
Thanks for the review
Kyle Peake. I have addressed all of your concerns. It's 3 am from where I am in the US and I'm hella tired. And to be honest, I am quitting Wikipedia as soon I as start college in August 2021.
The Ultimate Boss (
talk)
09:38, 20 February 2021 (UTC)reply
The Ultimate Boss Nice job, you only missed one change besides running the tool that was very minor anyway so I added it in for you. There were also a few errors made that weren't missed changes, so I fixed those for you accordingly. ✓Pass now and it will be a shame to see you retire from Wikipedia soon, but we still have FB to keep in contact! --
K. Peake11:14, 20 February 2021 (UTC)reply