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Attitudes
Captain Upham was a person who saw things simply in black and whites. He despised anything German as a result of the war and his incarceration, even refusing to allow German-made vehicles on his property. Also, he used to ignore medical advice just as an example to show doctors that he could do anything he wished.
Expatkiwi
All very true. There is an instance in the biography of him tucking into an extremely high-fat meal while hospitalised with a medical condition that made such a diet inadvisable. However, there was also an instance during his captivity when he did accept an MO's advice that, given his health at the time, he would certainly die if he made an escape attempt that would entail spending two nights in the open in the depths of winter. He asked if he had any chance at all and was told firmly that he had none at all.
Captain Pedant (
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08:38, 19 June 2018 (UTC)reply
Most highly decorated British soldier.
Charles is the only one to receive a double VC, which makes him the most decorated. There are no dual GC winners, and the VC is higher.
Wallie (
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12:13, 20 October 2008 (UTC)reply
Let's slow down a bit here. Yes, the only soldier in WWII to receive two VCs, but many other Commonwealth soldiers received numerous high decorations, such as
Hughie Edwards with his VC, DSO and DFC. If you want to include a definitive statement such as "most highly decorated" you should have a citation from a reliable source to back it up, no matter how obvious it may seem to you. Cheers,
Ian Rose (
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12:38, 20 October 2008 (UTC)reply
The VC is the highest award, and you know it. There are many references saying that Upham is the most highly decorated allied soldier of WW2. I did not cite these, as it is an unfair comparison, as I have found out that the MOH as at WW2 could only be awarded once. It is very clear that Upham is the most highly decorated British or Commonwealth solider of WW2. If Hughie Edwards was, he would have received a second VC - but he didn't. We are weighing here a (second) VC against a DSO plus a DFC. Fact. The VC is much much higher.
Wallie (
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13:16, 20 October 2008 (UTC)reply
It actually doesn't matter what you or I know, this project sets high standards of citation. If you want to use superlatives, cite them - you've just said there are plenty out there so it shouldn't be an issue to include one or two. Cheers,
Ian Rose (
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13:37, 20 October 2008 (UTC)reply
The reference you included does not involve Upham at all; it simply states that the VC and GC are the highest decorations, which is common knowledge. Ian requested a reference on your claim that Upham was the highest decorated soldier in the British and Commonwealth during the Second World War, and that needs to be added for your claim to stand. Personally, I have never read anything that states Upham was the highest decorated, I believe he was probably one of the highest, but I have never seen anything that states he is the highest. Please note the just because he was the only person awarded the VC twice in the Second World War does not necessarily make him the highest decorated. Take
Bob Braham for instance, he is noted as the highest decorated airman in the British and Commonwealth during the Second World War, but he was not a recipient of the VC. Cheers,
Abraham, B.S. (
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04:47, 21 October 2008 (UTC)reply
Well! This is clearly incorrect. All holders of the VC in the RAF, RAAF, etc., for example Cheshire, are more highly decorated than Bob Braham. Also, Wing Commander Guy Gibson VC, DSO & Bar, DFC & Bar, won the VC in addition to Braham's medals. I cannot see how that Bob Braham is the most highly decorated airman. Can you?
Wallie (
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17:22, 21 October 2008 (UTC)reply
Actually, no, they are not. The multitude of Braham's decorations out weigh all others, including Cheshire and Gibson, but, this is beside the point. We are here to discuss your claim that Upham was the highest decorated soldier, and if you cannot provide a relaible reference to support this claim, then your edits will have to be reverted. Cheers,
Abraham, B.S. (
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05:24, 22 October 2008 (UTC)reply
O. You mean the number (multitude). the most highly decorated refers to the quality of medals, not the number. A quick search on google will reveal who the most decorated Commonwealth soldier is of WW2. It is Upham. Many state that he is the most decorated Allied soldier, but this is disputable, as the USA could only award one MOH in WW2. The reference is reliable, as it states that the VC is the top award, which you also agree with. The three dual VC winners (Martin-Leake, Chavasse and Upham) are the most decorated Commonwealth soldiers of all time. I hope you will agree with that statement.
Wallie (
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17:09, 22 October 2008 (UTC)reply
No, actually, I was refering to the quality. The reference states the VC is the highest award, but nothing whatsoever about Upham. The reference needs to state Upham is the highest decorated for your claim to stand. I also disagree with your statement that Martin-Leake, Chavasse and Upham are the highest decorated British/Commonwealth soldiers of all time. It is well supported that
Harry Murray was the highest decorated infantry soldier in the British/Commonwealth during the First World War, and the highest decorated soldier in the British/Commonwealth of the same war is most likely to be
Frederick William Lumsden. The decorations of these two men individually exceede all three VC & Bar recipients. Cheers,
Abraham, B.S. (
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05:24, 23 October 2008 (UTC)reply
There are no doubt countless others that can be mentioned with ONE VC and a string of other decorations. I think that
Bernard Freyberg would rate here too, as he has actually the same medals as Lumsden and a few others besides. However, he is below Chavasse to my mind, as the VC is the "gold medal" and the others are of a lesser colour.
Wallie (
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09:58, 23 October 2008 (UTC)reply
I think this discussion in itself illustrates that the measurement of "most decorated", "most highly decorated", etc, is open to interpretation and that citations explicitly supporting any such assertion are always required, as Bryce says. However, given that even reliable sources may disagree on this, my own preference is simply to leave out such assertions and let the bare facts stand. As Wallie has pointed out, you cannot be awarded anything higher than a VC, and to be awarded two is clearly highly notable without the need for further comment. Cheers,
Ian Rose (
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06:29, 23 October 2008 (UTC)reply
I apologise to the pair of you for getting carried away from the true matter at hand. What I was trying to say is exactly this: for a claim or fact such as this to stand, or remain in the article, then it needs a reliable reference to actually state that Upham was the highest decorated soldier of the British/Commonwealth in the Second World War. If one cannot be produced, then it is best the edits be reverted as there is nothing to support the claim and it could later be found to be false (highly unlikely, I admit, but still possible). Cheers,
Abraham, B.S. (
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10:58, 23 October 2008 (UTC)reply
This is down to logic. As the VC is the highest award, and he is the only one to get two in WW2, this makes him the most decorated British/Commonwealth soldier. There are all sorts of other claims as to this and that person being the most decorated in various services etc. These are all opinins. In Charles Upham's case, it is very clear, as he is the only one for WW2 with this unique top award.
Wallie (
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15:14, 23 October 2008 (UTC)reply
It does. Hans Rudel is recognised as being the most decorated German in WW2, as he has the highest medal, awarded only to him. The same applies to Charles Upham. In WW2 the VC and bar was only awarded to him. That makes him the most decorated in WW2. The reference I gave clearly states that the VC is the top award, and Upham has two.
Wallie (
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09:17, 24 October 2008 (UTC)reply
You cannot compare the British and German honours systems of WWII; they were completely different. I'm starting to get sick of repeating myself; you must supply a reliable reference that actually says Upham was the most decorated, or I will revert your edits, it's actually as simple as that.
Abraham, B.S. (
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10:20, 24 October 2008 (UTC)reply
Why not compare them? The principle is the same. Also, as you mentioned, it is not just the British system - as you rightly pointed out to me, Upham was not British. You also seem to be getting slightly annoyed. We should all discuss this in a logical way. You have agreed yourself that the VC is the top award. Upham has two!
Wallie (
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17:19, 24 October 2008 (UTC)reply
Not really, the Germans used basicly a "build-on" system for their awards (e.g. Knights Cross --> Knights Cross with Oak leaves) and did not have any other honours, while the British did. Yes, Upham wasn't British, but the awards system he used was the British one, as he was a member of a Commonwealth nation under the British Empire. Cheers,
Abraham, B.S. (
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23:04, 24 October 2008 (UTC)reply
"Build on" means hierarchy does it not? The VC is the top medal. It has not been superceded to date. I hope you will face facts and recognise that the three VC double medal winners are the most highly decorated.
Wallie (
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13:55, 25 October 2008 (UTC)reply
Once again, the German honours system is completely different, and serveral others have been recognised as higher decorated then all three double VC recipients.
Abraham, B.S. (
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14:05, 25 October 2008 (UTC)reply
Why not stop debating semantics and refer to Upham as the "most highly decorated" as opposed to the "most decorated". Would that work?
Stephenjh (
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09:57, 24 October 2008 (UTC)reply
Thank you for your imput, but what I'm trying to say is that a reference to actually say Upham was the most decorated is required, otherwise it is debateable whether he was. Cheers,
Abraham, B.S. (
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10:20, 24 October 2008 (UTC)reply
That's my point too. I think it fairly obvious he was the "most highly decorared" (no reference required - if he was!) but a reference would be needed if it's stated that he is the "most decorated".
Stephenjh (
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10:30, 24 October 2008 (UTC)reply
I'm sorry, but it still needs to be referenced. As I have stated, you need a reliable reference to actually say Upham was the "most highly decorated". If you can provide this reference, then I will be satisfied and back off. If not, then your edits will have to be reverted. Cheers,
Abraham, B.S. (
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23:04, 24 October 2008 (UTC)reply
I have provided another reference. The FACT that Upham is the most highly decorated British and Commonwealth soldier seems obvious to everyone other than yourself. You keep asking me to provide more and more "evidence". I sincerely hope you are now satisfied.
Wallie (
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13:49, 25 October 2008 (UTC)reply
That's all that was asked by both myself and Ian Rose from the start, which was never provided until now. Wikipedia is a place that needs references as conclusive proof for claims such as this. I never stated that Upham was not the highest decorated, just that a reference was needed to support such a claim.
Abraham, B.S. (
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14:05, 25 October 2008 (UTC)reply
Now that we've finally sorted the citation for 'most highly decorated' - which Bryce rightly pursued after my initial query and Wallie has now satisfied - I'm afraid I need to raise a couple of other points. Firstly, the pictures of the VCs surrounding Upham's portrait seem a pretty obvious case of image cruft, merely decoration (if you'll excuse the expression) rather than information. Secondly, the Other Holders of the VC & Bar section is more detail than is necessary in an article on Upham. The others are mentioned and linked, appropriately, in the intro but an entire section logically belongs only in the Victoria Cross article, where it is already. I suggest both these things be removed. Cheers,
Ian Rose (
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12:26, 26 October 2008 (UTC)reply
Other articles about important decorated war heroes have similar medal pictures, eg,
Audie Murphy. I agree with you that the bit on the intro about the 3 double VC winners can be removed, but the section could remain. I have done this.
Wallie (
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17:10, 26 October 2008 (UTC)reply
I agree with Ian. The images don't really add much value to the article, not to mention too much dedicated to Martin-Leake and Chavasse. If anything, the brief mention in the lead should remain and the "Other holders of the VC and bar" section should go. These men have an article of their own. This article is ment focus on Upham and his life, not the Victoria Cross & Bar. Cheers,
Abraham, B.S. (
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05:18, 27 October 2008 (UTC)reply
The VC and Bar IS the central theme of Upham's life. Also, when people see than someone has more than one VC, they are natually curious as to how many similar awards have been made to other. Martin-Leake and Chavasse are the other two in this category. So they are definitely important. Related info is always important. It is handy to have brief notes in the main article, to my mind. Thanks.
Wallie (
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10:08, 27 October 2008 (UTC)reply
Maybe so, however there were other factors to this man's life then his military decorations. The whole purpose of the mention in the lead was to state that only two others have been awarded a VC & Bar, and if someone wanted to read about them it is as simple as clicking on a link. As I stated above, this article is about Upham, not Martin-Leak or Chavasse. Also, this is not the main article related to the VC, and the main article does mention these three men. Cheers,
Abraham, B.S. (
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10:58, 27 October 2008 (UTC)reply
David. I see that you have removed the second VC from Upham. Now he only has one. The bar is placed on the VC ribbon, not below it, as in this example. [
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Wallie (
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18:27, 28 October 2008 (UTC)reply
I'm a little on Wallie's side here. I think either both should be removed or both should be placed in the article. As Wallie correctly pointed out, Upham was a double recipient of the VC, not a single, so I don't think that that single image of the VC is appropiate, but also I just don't think it looks right on its own. Cheers,
Abraham, B.S. (
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21:00, 28 October 2008 (UTC)reply
We have reduced this to semantics now, so I'll bring it back to the main point: should we include image(s) of the VC, or not. I say either both or none, but am more in favour of none. Cheers,
Abraham, B.S. (
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10:23, 29 October 2008 (UTC)reply
The fact remains that Upham has two VCs and not one. You have mentioned this too. The semantics are not important, as you say. Whether you call it a VC and bar or a double VC, it is the same. The problem is that the some people would be not familiar with the concept of a bar.
Wallie (
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14:24, 30 October 2008 (UTC)reply
We're here to educate. He has one VC, and a bar, and doesn't have two medals. Like the majority of other people, I don't see any real necessity for the image to be in the infobox at all, and twice is just pointless and misleading. Best would be for some to go to the NZ Army Museum and get a photo of the complete medal set.
David Underdown (
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15:00, 30 October 2008 (UTC)reply
I think a quite clear consensus for the removal of the images has been reached. Of the four people involved in this discussion, three are in favour of removal and there is no strong argument for the images staying. As such, I will remove the images within the next twenty-four hours if there is no strong objection. Cheers,
Abraham, B.S. (
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05:06, 31 October 2008 (UTC)reply
I doubt it was Bernard Freyberg who attended the memorial in 1995, as he died in the 60's, most likely it was Valerian Freyberg, 3rd Baron Freyberg. —Preceding
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219.88.197.187 (
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01:15, 13 November 2008 (UTC)reply
There is a report in today's London Sunday Telegraph (mainly concerning the purchase by Lord Ashcroft of the VC & bar of Noel Chevasse) that the Imperial War Museum in London has purchased (reportedly for £1m) the medals of Charles Upham but due to export restrictions by the NZ g'ment they are on permament loan to the NZ Army museum... Anybody know the truth?
I see Mark of the Lion has been cited here and there - it's many years since I read my father's copy, but I recall that Upham's superiors were, in all seriousness, considering recommending him for a VC for the earlier action at Minqar Qaim as well as Ruweisat, but decided to roll Upham's deeds from the two actions into one since VC* was excessively rare without pushing for VC**. Worth mentioning?
Captain Pedant (
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06:54, 5 June 2011 (UTC)reply
Well, I inherited an exceedingly battered copy when my father died and I have re-read it and updated accordingly. One or two other incidents were in the wrong order or needed further description -- now done.
Captain Pedant (
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11:59, 21 June 2018 (UTC)reply
Displaying ribbons and medals in infobox
My recent edits adding graphical ribbons of the medals Upham was awarded have been reverted. Why can't these be added? As they convey more information to the reader. Also what dictates what medals can be displayed in the infobox? After I added his complete set of medals, that was reverted to what it currently shows which is only some of his medals.
Rudolph89 (
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06:42, 6 July 2012 (UTC)reply
Adding pictures of the medals or ribbons adds little information about the person the article is about. An infobox is a summary of key information not a compete list of particulars. Campaign and service medals are not key information, every soldier in the Commonwealth got these.
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12:47, 6 July 2012 (UTC)reply
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In the Other honours section - para 2, the article states: 'HMNZS Charles Upham, a Royal New Zealand Navy ship, was commissioned in 1995, and decommissioned in 2001.'
I'm no sailor, but six years seems to be rather a short time for a ship to be in service. Is it right?
Good work on the article,
Kiwiz1338. I suggest you move the following sentence to the next section: With the call for volunteers in September 1939, after the outbreak of the
Second World War, he lost no time in putting his name on the lists.Schwede6610:08, 20 June 2024 (UTC)reply
I will review this one. Before I get started though, I want to check that you have at least the Sandford and Scott books. At a glance, I can see some sourcing issues but these should be easy to fix if you have these two books. I think I have a copy of Sandford's book somewhere but it may not be the same edition used here.
Zawed (
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22:25, 21 June 2024 (UTC)reply
First off, I commend your work on this article, it has been improved significantly from what it was. There is still some tidying up to be done, but once that has been done and this is at GA level, I think you should take a run at A-Class review at MilHist with the article. It'll get more reviewing eyes there and prep it nicely for FA.
I'll deal with some initial issues first, and will do a closer review of the text once those have been dealt with. As noted above, there are issues with the sourcing so will start there.
Sourcing
I mention Sandford and Scott above, but another useful source would be Harper & Richardson's Acts of Valour (published by HarperCollins in 2016). That will be helpful for most of the WWII stuff and provide a bit of diversity of print sources so you aren't so reliant on Sandford. I would also lean on Scott more since it is a modern source. Done
Some of the internet sources strike me as being a bit dubious, e.g. NZedge (cite 1). I appreciate that these predate your work by several years but sourcing standards have really moved on since they were added. I am sure you would be able to cite these to Sandford, Scott and/or Harper & Richardson. Scott, being so recent, may mention some of the material covered in the "Other honours" section (which I think should be renamed to "Legacy"), so you could drop some of the web links there. Done
I have replaced NZedge with book ref's. Renamed to Legacy
Cite 14 is in the wrong format - since it is a obituary by the Press, it should be done in the "News" citation template, with the url going to the archive link. Done
Cites 25, 34, 38, 39 are inconsistent with the formatting used for the Sandford cites. Also, there are no page numbers for cite 25 and 39 which is unacceptable. Done
Cite 16 is improperly formatted and is presently named "Story: Upham, Charles Hazlitt"; it should be in the style of cite 2 as used at Cyril Bassett. Done
Cite 16 and cite 44 are actually the same publication (Crawford, listed in the Works cited section) but presented in different styles. Done
Cite 13 and 53 look to be the same as well (Hurunui District Council) Done
Cite 47 is a dead link (Derek Cheng in the Herald) Done
No date on cite 50 (NZ Police) Done
No page number for cite 59 (Scott) Done
The first usage of cite 40 does not support the statements that it is the source for. It doesn't name Martin-Leake or Chavasse as the previous recipients. Note that I will be doing some more spot checks on sourcing in the next phase of the review. Done
Replaced with book ref
The last two items in the "Works cited" section aren't actually cited and should be moved to the External links section. The Art of War link doesn't actually work properly anyway, for me at least. Delete it if it doesn't work for you. Done
Structure
The structure needs some work:
I suggest some subheadings within the WWII section, e.g. Greece and Crete, North Africa. Done
Some big paragraphs should be broken up, particularly the one that starts "In July 1940..." Done
the VC citations should be placed chronologically within the article. Done
Upham was presented with the ribbon to his VC in October/November 1941. This is worth mentioning, see Harper & Richardson Done
There is no mention of the presentation of the Bar to Upham; this happened in Christchurch in 1946 (see Harper & Richardson)
I think that there could be more on the circumstances around the decision to make the second award of the VC; again Harper & Richardson could be useful.
Delete the in popular culture section. You cite Scott in the article itself so seems pointless mentioning it here and the other fact is just trivia. Done
I expect that's enough for now, with a bit of work for you there. Let me know if you have any questions. Cheers,
Zawed (
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10:52, 24 June 2024 (UTC)reply
@
Zawed. Thanks for your help. I have put a check mark on the points I have done. Im stuggling to find anything for
"There is no mention of the presentation of the Bar to Upham; this happened in Christchurch in 1946 (see Harper & Richardson)" even in Harper & Richardson
and what to add with
"I think that there could be more on the circumstances around the decision to make the second award of the VC"