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"U.N. leaders were surprised by Drako's betrayal and actions had to be taken, as members from the Blue Lightning squadron joined his corrupted ranks while the remaining loyal forces eager a chance to overthrow his criminal group. The U.N. recurred to the squadron and assigned a rookie pilot of the force to stop Drako." These two sentences seem rather clunky. A rewrite for clarity would be a good idea.
Done -- I did some rephrasing to this sentence...
Roberth Martinez (
talk) 22:57, 5 December 2023 (UTC)reply
"The game's levels were co-designed by F. B. Stu, a member credited under the nickname "Mac" and Stuart Tilley," - Perhaps an extra comma to ensure it's not one person being credited under two names.
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ProtoDrake:Thank you once again for taking the time in reviewing one of my GA nominations!
Roberth Martinez (
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