"the album's second single" - I'd add what the first single was in the lead and the body
I do not think that it is necessary to put it in the lead and the body. If a reader is interested in reading about the other singles or more about the album, they can click on the link to the album.
Aoba47 (
talk) 15:39, 25 March 2018 (UTC)reply
I think the quote by Garrett is a bit much. The first 3 sentences in particular ("Nas is probably one of the coolest cats I've ever met. He's just so laid back. He's a really cool guy so it was dope.") I'd tone it down a bit, probably to the point where it doesn't need to be within a quote box anymore.
I think I can guess what a 'club burner' is (though not 100% sure), but what is a "rap joint" and what is "space-age hip hop"? Maybe I'm just not gangsta enough but I have don't know what this actually says about the song itself. Can you give any more specific descriptions of the song's composition and lyrics?
I have removed the quotes. Unfortunately, I believe that I have already exhausted all of the sources about the song in general, including the composition and lyrics.
Aoba47 (
talk) 15:39, 25 March 2018 (UTC)reply