I'll be doing the GA review for this article. Here are some suggestions for improvement:
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WP:LEAD, an article this size should have at least three full paragraphs in the lead. I'd suggest adding information such as her original conception, abilities, and her different depictions.
It might be a good idea to add the name "Holy Bell's appearances" as a title for the table (instead of a header) and float it to the right under the heading "Holy Bell". This will cause the text to text-wrap around it and reduce all the ugly white-space.
Done. I think it is a good idea - I might work on where to position the table within the text, but having it on the right certainly improves the layout. -
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03:16, 18 July 2008 (UTC)reply
Now I feel stupid - I completely missed the episodes in the table. :) Particularly dumb considering the time I spent playing with the table and hunting down a method for making it sit to the right. Thanks! -
Bilby (
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00:16, 19 July 2008 (UTC)reply
Thanks! I'll get on to those immediately. :) -
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I've made a pass to fix the commas - I'm aware of that being a problem in my writing, but I've never been able to get out of the habit. :) Any help with this would be much appreciated. -
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03:41, 18 July 2008 (UTC)reply
Hopefully I've managed to tackle all of the above, but if there are any more changes you find that it needs, or if I stuffed up somewhere, just let me know and I'll be really happy to take care of it. And thanks heaps for reviewing the article! -
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04:08, 18 July 2008 (UTC)reply