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Reviewer: Hawkeye7 ( talk) 11:09, 12 February 2010 (UTC)
- Well-written:
- (a) the prose is clear, concise, and
understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct; and
- Gave it a copy edit.
- (b) it complies with the
Manual of Style guidelines for
lead sections,
layout,
words to watch,
fiction, and
list incorporation.
- Yes.
- Verifiable with no original research:
- (a) it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with
the layout style guideline;
- Yes
- (b)
reliable sources are
cited inline. All content that
could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose); and
- Yes. Footnoted as per B-class MILHIST article.
- (c) it contains
no original research.
- Yes.
- Broad in its coverage:
- (a) it addresses the
main aspects of the topic; and
- Yes. Like some of the other editors, some more information on aviation support would be nice.
- (b) it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see
summary style).
- Yes.
- Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each.
- Yes. Very even handed.
- Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute.
- Yes.
- Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio:
- (a) media are
tagged with their
copyright statuses, and
valid non-free use rationales are provided for
non-free content; and
- Yes. Checked the dabs and all pix have alt text.
- (b) media are
relevant to the topic, and have
suitable captions.
- Yes.
- Mutual distrust between Oliver and Almond. Reasons why Oliver disliked and distrusted Almond are given. Reasons for the reverse are not.
- Cleared up, Almond found Smith's caution annoying
- AA guns of the 57th Field Artillery Battalion. I don't have your source. Mine assigns the AA to the 15th AAA Automatic weapons Battalion.
- D Battery of the 15th Antiaircraft Battalion was attached to the 57th Field Artillery Battalion. Cleared up. (BTW you don't have Appleman's book? I'm surprised.)
- More reinforcements arrived at Hagaru-ri on 30 November. What were they and how did they get there?