I will start the review shortly.--
Catlemur (
talk) 14:16, 1 April 2020 (UTC)reply
Mention Tipps's full name just as you did with Bagnall.
I would like to, but they don't ever seem to have published or been referred to as anything other than "G.K.". The internet simply doesn't have a full name.
Note 5 is unrefenrenced.
Fixed.
Did the battle take place in 255 BC or 256 BC? The infobox and lede contradict each other.
My typo. Apologies. Fixed. Thanks.
"The Carthaginians pursuing chased the Roman force off the hill" - reword this sentence.
Done.
The infobox claims that there were probably 15,000+ Carthaginians, this is not mentioned explicitly in the Armies section.
Amended to the correct figure of 16,000+. The armies section states "the Carthaginians fielded 100 elephants, 4,000 cavalry and 12,000 infantry". It seems insulting to the reader to add "which totals over 16,000."