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Just a heads up, I've gone ahead and made improvements to the the grammar/prose and general flow of much of the article. I think this should have been given more weight in the GA review. In particular, there were lots of run-on sentences with too many commas and semicolons, extra wordiness and redundancy in some sections, and the section on the hacking read like a news article. I also think think there was/is an over-reliance on direct quotes from the devs, but that's not so much of a grammar issue. I know this is somewhat of a high-profile article, so if anyone has any objection to my edits, please let me know. The Only Zac ( talk) 06:25, 31 October 2020 (UTC)
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The fourteenth word of the last sentence of the second paragraph is spelled wrong. It should be changed from ‘Imposters’ to ’Impostors’. 71.178.41.80 ( talk) 23:59, 11 November 2020 (UTC)
Wait, never mind, I just realised that ‘imposter’ is also correct. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 71.178.41.80 ( talk) 00:03, 12 November 2020 (UTC)
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I hope I'm doing this edit request thing correctly. The problem is that "Henry Stickmin" redirects here, which I think is stupid, as arguably, Henry Stickmin is more notable then Among Us. Hmm, maybe an AFC would be the more proper thing to do here, but I'm a lazy IP editor with no account and only a little bit of a grasp on how this all works. 24.236.225.133 ( talk) 04:09, 12 November 2020 (UTC)
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I would like to add some images of the available DLC content you can acquire in the game.
https://gamertweak.com/wp-content/uploads/2020/09/among-us-how-to-get-all-skins.jpg
https://progameguides.com/wp-content/uploads/2020/09/among-us-pets-selection-900x506.jpg
https://freegametips.com/wp-content/uploads/2020/09/1599840494_648_Among-Us-all-skins-pets-and-hats-how-to.jpg Hawkiloo ( talk) 03:01, 13 November 2020 (UTC)
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There is some grammar that needs editing VelocityYoyo777JJ ( talk) 02:17, 17 November 2020 (UTC)
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Please Split into 2 articles please split some of it to a intersloth article as it tersloth is the publisher and developer of the game 2600:8805:BC82:2300:184E:4C00:6E5E:306E ( talk) 21:38, 26 November 2020 (UTC)
Non-notable video game developer failing WP:GNG with no reliable independent in-depth sources, such as WP:VG/RS. In particular, none are significant coverage of the subject.SWinxy ( talk) 21:41, 26 November 2020 (UTC)