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Seychelles forest scorpion should be created as a redirect to this article.
- "critically endangered " is overlinked in the lead.
- "the IUCN and is" explain IUCN before using the abbr.
- Worth mentioning that Silhouette Island
is on the UNESCO World Heritage Site tentative list?
- "it was split" what was split?
- wasn't - avoid contractions.
- "internal granules" what are those in this context?
- "have 14-18 " en-dash.
- "medically significant" for humans.
- "killed individuals of this species" perhaps as this is a new section, be clear: "killed individual Seychelles forest scorpions"
- " Silhouette Island", "Mahé" and "Praslin" are overlinked.
- "The Seychelles forest scorpion is believed to live in very low population densities" you already said this two sections back.
- Ref 1 has a spare pair of quote marks.
That's it, a nice neat article. It's on hold.
The Rambling Man (
Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 10:54, 3 May 2021 (UTC)
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Pomatostomus are you going to address these comments? I normally allow seven days before failing. Cheers.
The Rambling Man (
Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 09:42, 6 May 2021 (UTC)
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- Ok, I'm failing this down to a lack of response. Hopefully the short list of items can be addressed at some point in the future.
The Rambling Man (
Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 12:20, 11 May 2021 (UTC)
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