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Grabbing this one as I may have some familiarity with concerts or television special. Plus, I thoroughly enjoyed watching this when it aired. I will review in the next couple days. My second dabble within the GAN review space (so apologies if it will be a bit slow).
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14:30, 7 June 2023 (UTC)reply
as well as previously released material -- as well as material from her previous albums or maybe tracks/singles from her previous albums, just so "released" isn't repeated
Background
which featured her performing for a crowd -- maybe an audience is much better
Synopsis
Maybe mention the actual filming location in Winfery's home in Montecito in the beginning and just give the second para lead a little tweak
beeped using a three-second delay -- maybe censored using a three-second delay. Could benefit linking to
broadcast delay as well
Reception
the special had 9.92 million primetime viewers -- could use either drew or attracted
primetime could be omitted as well, as this is assumed to be the live audience ratings as it aired, so viewers will suffice.
Assuming this is the journalist
Lorraine Ali. It could benefit linking.
but he was positive about the proposal - could use the correct pronoun (she) if this is meant to refer to Lorraine.
Set list
OK
Broadcast
Add full name Reference(s) to the abbreviation
Awards and nomination
I would use Ref(s) and Reference(s) in the table so it is both consistent.
References
Since source names have been mostly linked, so as a matter of consistency:
Thank you very much for taking up this review,
Pseud 14! I have actioned all of your comments and addressed them, along with some copyediting. Let me know if the revisions are satisfactory. Hope everything is well!--NØ16:26, 7 June 2023 (UTC)reply
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