As an experienced contributor, Sturmvogel, you'll excuse me being quite concise on the review - if you want further clarification, I'm more than happy. Opening words - just a few small things, no reason why it can't pass shortly. Ideally, although it doesn't fall under anything below, I think words on a "jargon level" of 'trunnion' should be linked. Also, if you could put into the article, suitably referenced, the " 1890—91" design time, and the "1891—1904?" production time from the infobox, as new material ought'nt be in the infobox (can't find the relevant guideline, but I believe this to be the case). I'm honestly not sure whether that needs to be complied with for GA status, but solving it would answer that anyway.
Could we have slight elaborate on the web references - such as the website name they came from? Helps with verifiability if they're broken and everything. Text sources are more the sufficient, by comparison. [I don't believe there's any need to keep the jarring block caps of the name.]
Passes, although I think rather reliant on the "[does not need to] cover every major fact or detail" clause because of the brevity of the history section - the reader has some idea, but it's not great. I'd consider perhaps thinking about what history ends up in the "Description" section, and what ends up below. "The Treaty of Versailles allowed the Germans to retain four pre-dreadnoughts, although only two, Schleswig-Holstein and Schlesien, were rearmed" [ my emphasis] means the History section sounds like we come in part way through, but this isn't the case you've read the Description section (hence why this isn't a blocking problem), but it would be preferable, I think, if the reader didn't have to do that, given the somewhat technical nature of the Description section.
OK, that's everything covered. I added a sentence to the lead, although I appreciate the problem. All fine now. (Will pass shortly.) Grandiose(
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