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Reviewing later.
Nova Crystallis
(Talk) 18:00, 1 July 2020 (UTC)
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- Since the event has already happened, some parts of the overview section needs to be changed to past tense.
- Maybe it's just me, but I don't see the prize money for the highest break in the reference.
- You can probably remove the first of the two consecutive citations to ref 19.
- "next to lead 8–7.[28][27]" Reorder refs.
- "contested the first; and" I think the semicolon can be removed here.
- I'm not sure, but do the century breaks need a colon before the name of the player?
That should be it.
Nova Crystallis
(Talk) 06:49, 11 July 2020 (UTC)
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