The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that
Billy Kee was going to include "Wembley" in the name of his child who was being born during the 2014 Football League Two play-off Final if he scored?
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Hello, I am planning on reviewing this article for GA Status, over the next couple of days. Thank you for nominating the article for
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If nominators or editors could refrain from updating the particular section that I am updating until it is complete, I would appreciate it to remove a edit conflict. Please address concerns in the section that has been completed above (If I've raised concerns up to references, feel free to comment on things like the lede.)
I generally provide an overview of things I read through the article on a first glance. Then do a thorough sweep of the article after the feedback is addressed. After this, I will present the pass/failure. I may use strikethrough tags when concerns are met. Even if something is obvious why my concern is met, please leave a message as courtesy.
Best of luck! you can also use the {{done}} tag to state when something is addressed. Lee Vilenski(
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Southend United and York City were the losing semi-finalists - I feel this could just be expanded to say who defeated who in the semis, rather than just name drop the remaining teams. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski(
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The match ended 1–0 to Fleetwood who were promoted to the third tier of English football for the first time in their history.- should have a comma in here somewhere. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski(
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regular 2013–14 season - I know the media does use this terminology, but it is a bit American to say the "regular season", I prefer "Fleetwood Town finished the 2013–14 season at fourth place in the Football League Two league table" which I think reiterates that whilst the season is still going on, they finished in fourth place in the table, which is true before and after the playoffs Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski(
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Actually, reliable sources use "regular season" too, because goals etc scored in play-offs is not considered part of the season. These are usually listed in "others" for appearances and goals.
The Rambling Man (
Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 16:08, 31 January 2021 (UTC)reply
Burton upon Trent on 11 May 2014. - I'm a bit anal about specific dates being sourced, I'm sure it's covered in one of the preceding refs, could we cite this specifically? Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski(
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participated in the play-offs prior to the 2014 final when they took part in the previous year's play-offs. - could we reword to avoid the repetition of play-off? Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski(
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which ended in a 0–0 draw with Kidderminster Harriers. - so, was this a penalty shootout or replay? Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski(
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I think the glaring issue with the article is the lack of comments from players/managers after the match - if we could have a paragraph about post-match for this, I' be happy. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski(
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I'll begin the review as soon as I can! If you fancy returning the favour, I have a list of nominations for review at
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WP:FAC, respectively. I'd be very grateful if you were to complete one of these if you get time. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski(
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The result was: promoted by
Joofjoof (
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Hi
The Rambling Man, review follows: article massively expanded from 27 January; article is well written and looks to be well sourced (I'm not massively knowledgeable on football databases but I have seen these ones used elsewhere and they look reliable); I didn't pick up any overly close paraphrasing from a random spotcheck; hooks are mentioned in the article and backed up by the sources cited, both are interesting but I prefer ALT0 as the snappier of the two. This just needs a QPQ and it'll be good to go -
Dumelow (
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