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September 5, 2010 Good article nomineeListed

GA Review

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Reviewer: Derild 49 21 ☼ 21:53, 3 September 2010 (UTC) Back again! Seeing how this is a very old nominee I'll review this now. Derild 49 21 ☼ 21:53, 3 September 2010 (UTC) reply

I didn't even recongnize that I had another up for review. Humm? Nascar 1996 22:35, 3 September 2010 (UTC) reply
Well, it's from 2 months ago. lol. Derild 49 21 ☼ 22:37, 3 September 2010 (UTC) reply
I think I need to redo most of the sources. They are from June. After this race, I really improved my writing skills. Nascar 1996 22:42, 3 September 2010 (UTC) reply
Yeah, this doesn't look as well written as your other GA's. Derild 49 21 ☼ 22:45, 3 September 2010 (UTC) reply
I will not be as active as I normally am. I am busy tomorrow, while being sick. Nascar 1996 23:21, 3 September 2010 (UTC) reply
No problem. Looks like NSD will help along here. Derild 49 21 ☼ 00:05, 4 September 2010 (UTC) reply
Count me in :). Airplaneman ✈ 13:40, 4 September 2010 (UTC) reply
Sorry, I'll be out today for a soccer tournament. I'll be one tomorrow. Derild 49 21 ☼ 16:14, 5 September 2010 (UTC) reply

In depth review

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b ( MoS):
  • Lead has to be expanded as with the other NASCAR article you've written.
    • Also, references in the lead are unnecessary. Since the lead summarizes the least of the article the information should be mentioned later and cited there.
  • Some terms and phrases are confusing such as "Three drivers had to move to the rear from a change after first practice". What is a "Change"?
    • "On the same lap, Todd Bodine drove his car to the garage." I'm assuming a "garage is a place to fix the car, but be more specific with a link or explaining the term.
The race summary section uses the phrases On lap # and By lap # a lot; try cutting those down.
There are too many, I do not have enough tiime to completely reword it like the newer articles, but I'll see what I can do. Nascar 1996 00:51, 5 September 2010 (UTC) reply
I cut down some, how is it now? Nascar 1996 00:54, 5 September 2010 (UTC) reply
It looks better now and I took some time to change a few others. Derild 49 21 ☼ 18:44, 5 September 2010 (UTC) reply
  1. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c ( OR):
This is broken. It is right now ref 12. Find an alternative please.
I have replaced that link. ~ Nerdy Science Dude 03:40, 4 September 2010 (UTC) reply
  1. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
Basing off the other article this needs Background and Post-Race sections.
 Done -- Nascar 1996 20:31, 4 September 2010 (UTC) reply
Also, add a "Standings after the race" section if there are any sources for this. Derild 49 21 ☼ 18:44, 5 September 2010 (UTC) reply
 Done Nascar 1996 19:55, 5 September 2010 (UTC) reply
Ref please. After I read through the article one more time, we should be done! Derild 49 21 ☼ 21:42, 5 September 2010 (UTC) reply
 Done Nascar 1996 22:09, 5 September 2010 (UTC) reply
  1. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  1. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:


  1. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  1. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

Congrats! I have passed the article! Derild 49 21 ☼ 23:36, 5 September 2010 (UTC) reply

Comments from other editors

  • In the lead, it says claim his fourth win of the season for Hamlin in paragraph 2, yet in paragraph 3, it says Hamlin's fifth win of the season. Which is it? Either way, I would remove one of the mentions (I'd go for removing the one in paragraph 3) as they are redundant. Airplaneman ✈ 02:54, 5 September 2010 (UTC) reply
  • Checklinks reveals one dead link, which I have tagged. Airplaneman ✈ 03:49, 5 September 2010 (UTC) reply

 Done Nascar 1996 12:57, 5 September 2010 (UTC) reply

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