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Kingsif (
talk) 17:12, 2 April 2020 (UTC)reply
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the
Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed
Sources look good, AGF on copyvio and OR bc tools are down; sources are reliable and quotes are correctly attributed
Infobox and cover good
One commons image - suitable
Could the quote box be made wider?
Other tables as standard
Lead a good length
History and talk show it's stable
Follows album MOS
Article title is a bit unwieldy, is it unable to just be 1980 (album)?
Is past in their past jazz-funk style supposed to be 'post'?
Sufficient lead
produced by them both sounds informal, could 'them' be removed, or some other phrasing used?
Ok, both past and custom modular synthesizers - I don't know what 'past' is doing here, if it means something special it needs a wikilink
In The title track voices, I know it's obvious but I think it should have "1980" included
Could there be a ref after 'computer technology' - end of sentence with quotes in
And again after 'uncertain decade'
Overall
on hold a few things.
Kingsif (
talk) 01:37, 3 April 2020 (UTC)reply
Okay, I revised all your prose and style concerns. I put in a request for the article to be moved to
1980 (album).
isento (
talk) 06:29, 3 April 2020 (UTC)reply