"Heavy rainfall was reported in Mexico.[1]" why is "rainfall" linked? Did you forget the MOS? :P
YEPacificHurricane 23:42, 24 August 2013 (UTC)reply
I think there is people dumb enough to not know what rainfall is. :P JK, I just forgot to delink it.--
12george1 (
talk) 03:20, 25 August 2013 (UTC)reply
"The storm tracked northeastward," to "The storm tracked northeast,".
YEPacificHurricane 23:42, 24 August 2013 (UTC)reply
"The cyclone strengthened to a peak intensity of 135 mph (215 km/h) north of Grand Bahama on August 24." why does the infobox say 100 knots then?
YEPacificHurricane 23:42, 24 August 2013 (UTC)reply
"Damage was minimal" you just said there was no damage!
YEPacificHurricane 23:42, 24 August 2013 (UTC)reply
Technically, there couldn't have been no damage. Even if next to nothing, there would have at least some damage because the storm flooded Ocracoke Island.--
12george1 (
talk) 03:20, 25 August 2013 (UTC)reply
"Most of Brownton, Georgia was destroyed by floods.[8]" get rid of the redlink.
YEPacificHurricane 23:42, 24 August 2013 (UTC)reply
"Ship observations were sparse in tracking the storm. It was last observed on September 22.[2]" combine these two sentences.
YEPacificHurricane 23:42, 24 August 2013 (UTC)reply
"Early on October 12, the sixth tropical cyclone of the season developed in the eastern Gulf of Mexico " delink GOM as you link it in previous section.
YEPacificHurricane 23:42, 24 August 2013 (UTC)reply
"It quickly weakened and made landfall Southwest Florida near Naples, Florida as a Category 1 hurricane.[11] " "Landfall Southwest"? forgot a word? :P
YEPacificHurricane 23:42, 24 August 2013 (UTC)reply