Reorganize the lead better. First paragraph is one sentence, second paragraph is huge, then third paragraph is one sentence again.
Y Tried to improve the lead, hope it is satisfactory... =) Feel free to make a copyedit, as I'm not a native speaker.
lil2mas (
talk) 23:22, 26 April 2010 (UTC)reply
Per
WP:EGG, improve the links to
1903 Tour de France, etc.; link "1903 Tour de France" or something to make it more clear that it's linking to the Tour de France article and not
1903.
Any updates to the article's lead? I will be unavailable after Thursday, so if you need more time than that, then I can remove myself from this article and just let another reviewer pick it up. It shouldn't take long since there's the
backlog drive running right now. Gary King (
talk) 18:15, 26 April 2010 (UTC)reply
All comments should now be addressed... =)
lil2mas (
talk) 23:22, 26 April 2010 (UTC)reply
Okay looks better, passing Gary King (
talk) 00:21, 27 April 2010 (UTC)reply